Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Love & Rain

Same are love and rain,
As both help life sustain.
Happiness flows all around,
As they strike the ground.
One hits the ground of clay,
The other has the field of heart to play.
One difference I find,
I'll tell you if you do not mind.
Rain drenches only our body,
Love fills up our eyes,dear buddy.

Posted by Samrat at 05:01
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20 comments:

  1. Sri Valli18 November 2012 at 02:30

    Ahh!...I loved the way you compared rain with love....Beautiful poem :)

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    1. Samrat19 November 2012 at 05:03

      Hi, sri,its really encouraging to receive comments especially from such a talented person as you are. Thank you so much for taking out some valuable time of yours for my blog and commenting. Please come again.

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  2. Balqis DBJ19 November 2012 at 01:53

    This is really a beautiful poem. Loved the beautiful expressions between love and rain. You penned it so well! I'm happy to read you again. :)

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    1. Samrat19 November 2012 at 05:05

      Hi, Balqis, you have always been a truly good friend who has always inspired me to write better. Thank you so much again.

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  3. Unknown21 November 2012 at 11:33

    Its a beautiful poem and no doubts very well compared.

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  4. Samrat23 November 2012 at 07:10

    Hi, welcome to my blog. Thanks for your valuable comment.

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  5. Anonymous24 November 2012 at 06:45

    Poetry, that too with love and affection as subjects, is my favourite. loved the last two lines. Great thoughts and superb comparison.

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  6. Samrat24 November 2012 at 07:06

    Hi, thank you ever so much for your comment. Please visit my blog again.

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  7. Unknown9 December 2012 at 05:16

    wow ,nice poetry :)

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  8. Samrat11 December 2012 at 06:41

    Thanks

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  9. Aakki29 December 2012 at 09:24

    You know how beautifully and wisely use your words.
    It was a very nice post Samrat.........Keep going

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  10. Samrat30 December 2012 at 07:21

    Thanks. That was so nice of you.

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  11. CEO Lisa Anne - L.A6 February 2013 at 09:40

    Beautiful poetry! :) Thanks for visiting and your nice comment.
    Wishing you a wonderful week.

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  12. Shreya17 February 2013 at 22:49

    Lovely one, Sam. :)

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  13. Noopur20 February 2013 at 03:23

    Beautiful comparison :)

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  14. Megha Sarin20 February 2013 at 03:51

    Great poetry..love and pain are both part and parcel of life..

    Love
    http://www.meghasarin.com

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  15. Samrat20 February 2013 at 09:31

    Yep, Thanks .

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  16. wow gold3 April 2013 at 01:41

    great post, I am interesting in it!

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