Wednesday, 7 November 2012

Love & Rain

Same are love and rain,
As both help life sustain.
Happiness flows all around,
As they strike the ground.
One hits the ground of clay,
The other has the field of heart to play.
One difference I find,
I'll tell you if you do not mind.
Rain drenches only our body,
Love fills up our eyes,dear buddy.

21 comments:

  1. Ahh!...I loved the way you compared rain with love....Beautiful poem :)

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  2. This is really a beautiful poem. Loved the beautiful expressions between love and rain. You penned it so well! I'm happy to read you again. :)

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    1. Hi, Balqis, you have always been a truly good friend who has always inspired me to write better. Thank you so much again.

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  3. Its a beautiful poem and no doubts very well compared.

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  4. Hi, welcome to my blog. Thanks for your valuable comment.

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  5. Poetry, that too with love and affection as subjects, is my favourite. loved the last two lines. Great thoughts and superb comparison.

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  8. You know how beautifully and wisely use your words.
    It was a very nice post Samrat.........Keep going

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  9. Thanks. That was so nice of you.

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  10. Beautiful poetry! :) Thanks for visiting and your nice comment.
    Wishing you a wonderful week.

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  11. Great poetry..love and pain are both part and parcel of life..

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  12. great post, I am interesting in it!

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