Thursday, 19 January 2012

I bid adieu to you

With heavy heart, I bid adieu to you,
As beautiful time evaporates like dew.
So many memories You retain,
Some came as boon,some as bane.
You showered me with appreciation and praise,
You offered life in a different paraphrase.
You also twisted my heart with pain,
Through which I had only to gain.
You acquainted me with the beauty of life,
You gave strength for all the struggle and the strife.
You offered life the most precious gift.
'Trust','Love' that had all gone adrift.
You made me laugh;you made me cry,
You changed my life,I can not deny.
Good bye to you,my sweetheart, 2011,
You'll forever be remembered as the tree of heaven.


p.s=This poem was written on 31st of december, 2011. But due to my earlier commitments to my job and other preoccupations,It could not be posted.

47 comments:

  1. Wonderful poem Sam, :) Goodbye sad memories of 2011! May those good one remain in our heart.:) Blessed day to you Sam :) Smile :)

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    1. Thank you so much,Dang, for encouraging me everytime. God bless.

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  2. As I've mentioned in my new year post.. Cherish Memories, and Chase your Dreams..! Nice farewell poem Sam ! Keep writing more frequently..we would like to read more from you ! :)

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    1. Hi, thank you so much, kitty, for such a nice comment as this. You guys are so nice to me. Thanks again.

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  3. So beautifully penned! The way you bid goodbye is really one of a kind. The title itself is eye-catching that fills my mind with curiosity. As I read through, your beautiful expressions are for the year that had gone by. The poetic touch in it is so amazing! :)

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    1. Hi, Balqis, i simply can not figure out how to express my gratitude to you for so many sweet words of yours. Thank you so much, friend.

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    1. Hi, swati, welcome to my blog. Thank you for your comment. Please keep visiting.

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  5. great job... there's a lot of sincerity in your words..beautiful :)

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  6. Hi, thank you so much, friend, for your nice comment.

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  7. This poem is very beautiful.You are very creative and talented.

    Thanks for your comment on my blog.

    Following you.

    Care to follow back?

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  8. Hello, Dear Samrat,

    Your poetry is so *beautiful*! Your phrasing and rhymes are wonderful. Even the title rhymes :) A memorable and lovely 'farewell' to 2011!

    Thank you so much for coming to visit my blog and deciding to join. A new face always brings a smile and your comment really touched my heart :) Thank you!

    Looking forward to reading more from you here ~
    Hope 2012 is a beautiful year for you!
    Best Wishes,
    Fiona

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    1. Hi, princess Fiona,
      welcome to the world of evocative dreams. I feel extremely honoured to receive your kind and gracious comment here. All the guests are special though, You, with the phenomenal capacity of expression, are an inspiration to all. Thank you. Please keep visiting.

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  9. hello samrat!
    what a great poem to end 2011 ^_^
    thanks for following me

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    1. Hi, Klai, thank you so much for visiting and commenting. Your encouraging words matter a lot.

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  10. Hello brother, your poetry very azaming, very wonderful. Thanx.
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  11. Thank you for taking some time out and commenting on my post.

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  12. Hello Samrat.
    You and poems go well together.
    I really dont have words for this one you wrote though.
    Just to good for words.

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  13. beautiful poem samrat ! keep up the good work :-)

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  14. I enjoy being here I look forward to seeing your posts :)

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  15. Hi, Suain, thank you for your encouraging comment. Please visit my blog again.

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  16. Such a sad but beautiful poem, Samrat.

    See you at bloggers! ;-)

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  17. Hi samrat, came from Sagittarian, out of curiousity, after reading your beautiful poem in he blog this morning.
    This piece on 2011 is also awe some, how you express you love , appreciation and gratitude to 2011, really touches my thoughts deep down. Glad I came by.
    Looking forward if you could visit my current post on tea the sahara- woulod love some awesome words from you… I like your style. have a nice day

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  18. Thank you, sure, I'll take a trip to your blog shortly.

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  19. Hi there!

    The poem is so lovely :) And sure i was a bit curious and even a bit of sure that it would be about a girl but alas... Its for the year 2011... well written :)

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  20. Thank you for visiting my blog and leaving your valuable opinion. Please keep coming.

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  21. That´s beautiful, I like your poetry, and foloww you. Thanks for share it.

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  22. Hello Samrat! :)

    Thank you for visiting my blog.

    I am very fond of rhyming poems and you have penned a beautiful one here. The emotions are heartfelt. Bidding farewell on such a positive note leaves no regret. Might I say that this is a perfect "closure".

    I look forward to more poetic presentations from you.
    Have a good day! ^◡^

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  23. Hi,Sui, Thank you so much for those lovely words.I liked your blog a lot too. Keep visiting.

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  25. These are beautiful words that remind her of saying goodbye to an ex or something, you are talented.

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  26. Hi Samrat,
    Beautiful poem, well written! Loved the rhyme :)
    I loved your writings! ♥ Nice blog too...
    Keep writing... Waiting for your next post!
    Best wishes,
    Hanan

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  27. Lovely poem. I to at times write well maybe attempt to write poetry and add to my blog: Behind The Smile. My blog is about my experiences and I hope helps others in some way. I have connected to you through google friend connect.

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