Tuesday, 4 October 2011

I couldn't tell you ....

Surprised with a capital " S", I stood,
As you asked  , " why do you love me"?
Surprised was I , not with you, but with myself.
As words came to my throat ;
They couldn't find their way out of my quivering lips.
I wanted to tell you many things;
Yet I couldn't .
Your presence got me tongue-tied as always.
I couldn't tell you
As words fail to surpass the limitations of language
To delineate the subtle, intangible, ineffable human feelings.
I couldn't tell you
Your eyes and face radiate a sublime angelic aura,
Which, when set on me,
Makes me feel nonplussed,
Or rather, stupefied ;
At the same time, a joy-inexpressible-inundates
The entire entity of mine,
And gradually the whole world.
I couldn't divulge
Anything that is most beautiful,
Anything that is most invaluable,
Anything that is most amazing,
Anything that is most phenomenal,
Anything that is most marvelous ,
Anything that can be most sought after
is YOU
May be some other time,
May be some other evening,
Under the star studded sky
With bright, radiant, charming moon up above,
Sitting at the same place in the garden,
I'll speak my heart out to you.
I'll let you know how much priceless you are.
My existence without you would be like
A man within the grave, alive , awake,
Battling for life, tussling with utmost earnestness, 
To have the slightest glimpse
Of the beautiful face of yours,
With may be a tiny drop of tear
In your ever magnetic,alluring eyes'.

May be some other time,
May be some other evening,
I'll let you know....  .







19 comments:

  1. Great! Loved it!.:) Thumbs up!

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  2. A truly passionate poem - great writing Sam!! :)

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  3. beautifully written, sam! i like this post.

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  4. Thank you, louise. Thank you chairein.

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  5. Hey Samrat...seems u love someone from ur deep heart...If she s wid u...m happy n if nt I pray fr togetherness...

    Lots of love. Keep it up!

    Mani

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  6. Mani, thank you for your comment. But you are entirely mistaken like many others'.

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  7. Thank you for your valuable comment, kitty.

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  8. The way you have expressed your life without her is very shockingly amazing Samrat! I hope you hve one sch person in your life already! :) If not, Hope you meet her soon! :)

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  9. Hi, Akila venkat, as you are aware that every writer has a penchant for writing about a particular aspect of human sensitivity. Likewise, the sad part of one of the sweetest human feelings called ' Love' attracts me a lot. So, I mostly write about it. Hence, you are entirely mistaken if you consider my writings as my personal experience. Having said that I would like to mention here that I also wrote about the happy part of ' Love' ( refer to my first three posts, 1." Willing to tell you something", 2. " your one single sight", 3. " you are incomparable". Anyways, thank you for visiting my blog and leaving your valuable comment on my invaluable blog-posts.

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  10. this is awesome... very passionate and intense .... keep going...

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  11. Thank you ever so much, will.

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  12. another good publishing from you ! nothing less expected :)

    well done !

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  13. Thank you for your generous comment, inspevtor saahab.

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