Sunday, 23 October 2011

You are like an elegant verse

You have tip-toed into my life like an elegant verse,
You have awakened my sleeping soul.
Before you, my life was God's most cruel farce,
You have taught me to fight till I reach my goal.

You have come into my life like a titanic wave of the sea,
Flooding all my senses ; compelling  to surrender.
Your soft, soothing voice makes me happy and glee,
As your simple touch makes me shine with splendor.

Your presence sprays the ethereal aroma of love
That transports me to the unforeseen world of romantic dreamland.
You inspire me to grow strong and never be a mourning dove.
As being with me forever is your only demand.

 Your reassuring smile settles all my grief and strife,
As you seem to be the sole pole star of my life.
Posted by Samrat at 09:06
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29 comments:

  1. Sagittarian23 October 2011 at 16:27

    This is great Sam! Very inspiring and lovely post..:) I like it..:) Have a great day!

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  2. Samrat24 October 2011 at 04:05

    Hi, thank you so much.

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  3. Louise Hernan24 October 2011 at 09:35

    This is beautiful Sam - you certainly do have a special way with words!! :)

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  4. Samrat24 October 2011 at 18:32

    Hi, Louise, thank you so much for those kind words. It's really encouraging.

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  5. Shreya26 October 2011 at 02:58

    Nicely written Sam :)

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  6. Samrat26 October 2011 at 09:52

    Thank you so much, shreya

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  7. Kitty30 October 2011 at 04:13

    First of all, I liked the name of your poem...it grabs your attention ! :)
    feeling is the febric woven by beautiful words...nice poem ! :)

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  8. Samrat30 October 2011 at 11:05

    Thank you so much for your beautifully presented view, kitty.

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  9. TheDollsFactory4 November 2011 at 18:07

    is this poetry yours?
    if so it's great
    come and say Hi, we could start a stylish friendship
    The Dolls Factory

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  10. Samrat4 November 2011 at 19:07

    Of course its mine. It's my blog and whatever I post on my blog is originally created by me. Hence it's mine. Thanks.

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  11. Inspiredbeautyofcourse11 November 2011 at 00:03

    I'm so glad I stopped by. Very sweet poem.

    Sincerely,

    Larisa

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  12. Samrat11 November 2011 at 22:21

    Thank you so much, Larisa.

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  13. marieab_4326 November 2011 at 16:32

    Very beautiful and touches the Soul.

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  14. Samrat26 November 2011 at 21:59

    Thank you Anna.

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  15. Anonymous30 November 2011 at 05:37

    "Your presence sprays the ethereal aroma of love"
    You have a great way with words and emotions my friend. I absolutely love the way you write. Just awesome.

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  16. Samrat30 November 2011 at 21:36

    Thank you so much for such a generous comment of yours. Such comments always encourage me to pick up the pen and scribble on my notebook at times despite my busy schedule. Thanks again.

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  17. Balqis DBJ1 December 2011 at 07:02

    I like this poem. The title itself is so nice. An elegant verse is in a class of its own. It has so much beauty that can draw attentions. A well-penned poem and very expressive. :)

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  18. Samrat2 December 2011 at 03:53

    Thank you ever so much, Balqis, for your comment. It's highly encouraging.

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  19. Prime Aque2 December 2011 at 05:43

    I like this, you are a poet my friend, there is no really question about that... you successfully transported your emotions with the medium that can really touch one's heart!

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  20. samrat2 December 2011 at 06:18

    Thank you ever so much, friend.

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  21. Confused Soul6 December 2011 at 10:00

    WOw this is good work... Love the verses and feel of the poem.. Good job :)

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  22. Samrat6 December 2011 at 16:40

    Thanks, friend.

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  23. Unknown7 December 2011 at 10:15

    you are an elegant verse ... very lovely and words are incomparable ... I like it so much ... :-)

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  24. Samrat8 December 2011 at 05:35

    Thank you, will, for your valuable comment.

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  25. Inspector Saahab12 December 2011 at 06:26

    beautifully written. how sweet!

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  26. Samrat13 December 2011 at 06:55

    Thank you, inspector saahab.

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  27. O.Silva21 December 2011 at 12:26

    very nice poem. the image is incredibly beautiful.

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  28. Samrat21 December 2011 at 17:02

    Welcome to my blog,miss. silva. .Thank you for your comment.

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  29. Cloe Bowie15 January 2012 at 07:25

    Wow, I love to write poetry. I wish I could write like this; the rhyme scheme appeared to be spot-on, yet, every line felt so natural -- instead of forced, like my poetry often is.... Anyway, outstanding job, darling. (:

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