Tuesday, 20 December 2011

You are my soul mate

Sweetness oozes through every pore of your face,
As innocence accentuates the beauty and the grace.
Your eyes remind me of a luminous,tranquil black pool,
With all the resplendence,you seized my heart to rule.
Everytime you glance at me on the sly,
My heart always yearns to fly.
Whenever the gust of wind flows your hair,
I feel my life to a be a dream, so rare.
Your presence sprinkles a whiff of seraphic fragrance,
And fantasy becomes the realm of my sole carte blanche.
"You are and you will forever remain my soul mate",
I mumble as I look at your winsome gait.

47 comments:

  1. beautiful ! how sweet ^^
    the words chosen are just perfect. the flow really melts the ice :) keep coming :)

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  2. Thank you. You are very generous by nature, I presume.

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  3. i did really mean what i said and you deserve an applause for the great art work :)

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  4. This is so sweet Sam,:) I know your soul mate feel this too, from the beginning till the last word from you, I presume you are falling in love with your soul mate..:) How lucky she is to have your heart.:)

    May this coming year brings you more happiness Sam, :)

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  5. Thank You so much, Inspector Saahab.

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  6. Hi, Dang, :D How lucky I am to have a friend like you :D!!! Jokes apart, I, truly, appreciate your feelings and the exuberance with which you speak after reading the post. It clearly shows that you have liked the post which serves the ultimate objective of mine as a writer. Thank you so much. Please keep visiting.

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  7. So beautiful! You write all what it takes for an eternal love.

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  8. Thank you, Balqis, for spending some of your precious time in reading my post and leaving a valuable comment.

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  9. Am always here to read and read your lovely and sweet post Sam..:) You're great like I used to tell you, and that's true..:) Thank you for sharing us your work from heart..:) God bless!:)

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  10. WOW ! just beautiful ! passionate words and red rose in the background enhances the romantic atmosphere :)

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  11. Thank you so much, kitty, for your valuable comment.

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  12. this piece is truly sweet, lines are written very romantic and the background send so much loves that adds up .... :-)

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  13. To write with passion, one has to feel passionately, which you obviously do Sam - very
    nice!! :)

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  14. Thank you ever so much, Louise

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  15. That indeed touched a corner in the heart... sweet and eternal, penned with a lot of love!

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  16. Hi, Arti. Welcome to my blog. Thank you so much for your lovely comment. Please keep visiting.

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  17. Really Samrat.
    You actually made my knees weak when i read this. Awesome is not the way i can describe this.
    "You are and you will forever remain my soul mate"
    Those words can melt anyone heart when uttered.
    You really are an extraordinary and acceptional writer. I love reading this.
    I cannot wait for the next piece to read. Hurry up will ya. lol.

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  18. @Shreya = Welcome to my blog. Thank you so much for your precious comment.

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  19. Hi,Berlina, Thank you so much, buddy, for showering me with so much sweet words.My heart overflows with happiness and glee that encourages me to write more and more.Hope to be back soon.And yes, please keep coming back.

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  20. My pleasure Samrat.
    Just make sure you write more. You have a great talent to grab an audience by their hearts. Keep it that way.
    Have a great week ahead.

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  21. Hi,Berlina, Thanks.Same to you.

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  22. Beautiful post Samrat :) You have written after a long time, but its nice :)

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  23. Awww how lovely! This is so beautiful. Lucky the person this was written for.

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  24. Hi, Shreya, its always nice to see you here. Thank you for your comment. please keep visiting.

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  25. Hi,Miss Lego, I am extremely happy to see you here on my blog after a long time. Thank you ever so much for your comment. Lucky me, because I have such a nice friend as you are here. I choose to write on 'Love', only because Love, I presume, is the sweetest and most vital aspect of human sensitivity that can encourage you into leading a new life afresh with a new hope,despite all the odds and complexities of today's life. Inspiration comes from within. please keep visiting.

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  26. Nice and beautifully written, really like it.....:)

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  27. youre poems are wonderful!!

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  28. Hi, Inaam, welcome to my blog. Thanks for your nice comment.

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  29. Hi Dee, welcome to my blog. Thank you for your nice comment. Please keep visiting.

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  30. Samrat! good one!!!! Great New Year to you..

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  31. Hi, Cindyrina, thank you. Wishing you a great new year too.

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  32. This is so beautifully written! :-)

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  34. I really like this!
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    1. Hi,Taro, welcome to my blog. Thank you for taking some time out for reading my blog. I appreciate it. please keep visiting.

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  35. "Whenever the gust of wind flows your hair,
    I feel my life to a be a dream, so rare"

    she must be very luck Samrat, I find your poems really beautiful...good luck for everything

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    1. Hi,Maria, welcome to my blog. I appreciate your comment. please visit again.

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  36. I hope my block is over and I start writing again :)

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  37. You have quite a way with rhyming, darling. (: You inspire me to work harder on my poetry, seeing how beautiful poetry can really be.

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  38. Hi Lola, thank you so very much for your generous comment. I am extremely happy for friends like you who inspire me so much for my writings. Please keep visiting.

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  39. This is the way I feel for my husband Adam <3 very cool poem dude, keep it up! super nice :D

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    1. Hi, Thank you so much for your highly motivational remark.Please do visit my blog again.

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