Sunday 23 October 2011

You are like an elegant verse

You have tip-toed into my life like an elegant verse,
You have awakened my sleeping soul.
Before you, my life was God's most cruel farce,
You have taught me to fight till I reach my goal.

You have come into my life like a titanic wave of the sea,
Flooding all my senses ; compelling  to surrender.
Your soft, soothing voice makes me happy and glee,
As your simple touch makes me shine with splendor.

Your presence sprays the ethereal aroma of love
That transports me to the unforeseen world of romantic dreamland.
You inspire me to grow strong and never be a mourning dove.
As being with me forever is your only demand.

 Your reassuring smile settles all my grief and strife,
As you seem to be the sole pole star of my life.

29 comments:

  1. This is great Sam! Very inspiring and lovely post..:) I like it..:) Have a great day!

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  2. This is beautiful Sam - you certainly do have a special way with words!! :)

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  3. Hi, Louise, thank you so much for those kind words. It's really encouraging.

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  4. First of all, I liked the name of your poem...it grabs your attention ! :)
    feeling is the febric woven by beautiful words...nice poem ! :)

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  5. Thank you so much for your beautifully presented view, kitty.

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  6. is this poetry yours?
    if so it's great
    come and say Hi, we could start a stylish friendship
    The Dolls Factory

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  7. Of course its mine. It's my blog and whatever I post on my blog is originally created by me. Hence it's mine. Thanks.

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  8. I'm so glad I stopped by. Very sweet poem.

    Sincerely,

    Larisa

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  9. Very beautiful and touches the Soul.

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  10. "Your presence sprays the ethereal aroma of love"
    You have a great way with words and emotions my friend. I absolutely love the way you write. Just awesome.

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  11. Thank you so much for such a generous comment of yours. Such comments always encourage me to pick up the pen and scribble on my notebook at times despite my busy schedule. Thanks again.

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  12. I like this poem. The title itself is so nice. An elegant verse is in a class of its own. It has so much beauty that can draw attentions. A well-penned poem and very expressive. :)

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  13. Thank you ever so much, Balqis, for your comment. It's highly encouraging.

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  14. I like this, you are a poet my friend, there is no really question about that... you successfully transported your emotions with the medium that can really touch one's heart!

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  15. Thank you ever so much, friend.

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  16. WOw this is good work... Love the verses and feel of the poem.. Good job :)

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  17. you are an elegant verse ... very lovely and words are incomparable ... I like it so much ... :-)

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  18. Thank you, will, for your valuable comment.

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  19. Thank you, inspector saahab.

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  20. very nice poem. the image is incredibly beautiful.

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  21. Welcome to my blog,miss. silva. .Thank you for your comment.

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  22. Wow, I love to write poetry. I wish I could write like this; the rhyme scheme appeared to be spot-on, yet, every line felt so natural -- instead of forced, like my poetry often is.... Anyway, outstanding job, darling. (:

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